May 2025 Progress Report.


Green Eyre's End Progress Report.

While reading through the content, I figured I wanted some more time to think about Chapter 7 changes, so I rewrote Chapter 8 instead for now, and that's complete.

Most of the events remain the same, but the dialogue and details changed quite a bit (the village dynamic in particular).

For the main differences, they are in Daniel's section, where now he gets to meet Drake, and spend some time with Olivia reading through confidential documents. We also get some more inner monologue from Rodrigo remembering the past. All these combined should clarify the town's history and evolution much better than before.

I'm going to rewrite Chapter 4 and 5 next.

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